Girl Blood Obsession Chapter 1-5 [finished] by Indri Indah Yulianti

Girl Blood Obsession 

Chapter 1

A girl was sitting in the corner of a cafe near the window, watching the cascade of rain in the afternoon, with a flat face, and a look of sorrow. She's Alanna. Alanna often visits the café just to sit quietly while looking at the outside of window and accompanied by a cup of her favorite vanilla latte. There was nothing that Alanna could do other than enjoy the chill in the cafe. Not because she lazy to do another activity like drinking or watching with her friends, but because it's impossible because Alanna had no friends.

From childhood she was getting bullied by her friends because of his disfigured face. Alanna was born with a facial cleft and nose airways were not properly formed.  Entering high school, with the appearance of acne makes Alanna's face look worse and makes her confidence weaken. She always got bullying from her friends in the school and that make it worse. So that, after school surely Alanna's always visits her favorite cafe at Theo's cafe.

"Hey Alanna, do you want to add a meal or dessert?" Theo asked. 

"Hmm I think no, but I want one more vanilla latte please," Alanna answered.

"Your face looks pale Alanna, haven't you eaten since this morning?" Theo asked again. 

Alanna shook her head. "It's okay, Theo, a cup of vanilla latte is enough to make me satisfied".

Theo sighs "hey Alanna don't be like that, okay wait a minute I'll make you a dessert so you won't starve. Don't say no, okay! "Theo replied in a worried and annoyed tone.

Theo is the owner of a café that Alanna often visits, older than Alanna by ten years. Theo already thought of Alanna as his own sister. He felt mercy every time Alanna visited his cafe because she was always looking glum and sad. Theo didn't mind with Alanna's appearance because Theo understood Alanna's situation.

"Here comes the vanilla latte with smile emoticons on it and with Vanilla Chip Dessert. Hey, smile, Alanna" Theo said as he smiled.

"Thank you so much Theo, you are the only friend who can make me cry happily," Alanna said as she smiled.

"Hahaha hahaha" they laughed.

***

"Alanna, hurry up and have a breakfast, in five minutes you should go to the school" 

"Wait mom hhhhhhh" Alanna sighed. 

With a heavy heart Alanna immediately accelerated her preparations for school and hurried to breakfast. 

"Hey honey, hurry up and finish your breakfast," Mama said. "Yes mom" Alanna said.

Alanna's mom kissed Alanna on the forehead and said, "you always look beautiful in mom and dad's eyes." 

Alanna smiled and kissed the cheek of her mother and her father. 

Five minutes passed, Alanna and her father quickly hurried to the car and left to take Alanna to school.

***

Arriving at school, as usual he always received an insults from his friends. Alanna rushed to the classroom and ignored all the insults that made her heart get hurt. 

"Look, the beast is coming," said one of her classmates. 

"You shameless," he said again. 

Alanna immediately put on a headset and played a song with a very loud volume. Then, she put her head on the table and stared out the window.

***

After returning from school, as usual Alanna immediately went to Theo's café. However, this steps stopped when she saw a woman being dragged and forced into a car. Alanna immediately looked for a taxi and followed the direction of the car that had kidnapped the woman. After 20 minutes of her ride, the car turned out to lead to the empty building.

Alanna got out of a taxi and followed the culprit. The culprit took the girl into a building on the 3rd floor. Alanna followed him out of the open. Alanna was surprised that the criminal was a woman. Then, the woman moved the unconscious victim into the bathtub. Then, she killed that woman and split her whole body. Alanna was shocked and unconsciously she screamed. The woman who was killing immediately looked at Alanna and immediately chased Alanna.

"Aww hhhhh" Alanna fell on the stairs and groaned in pain. Shortly Alanna was captured by the killers woman.

Chapter 2
Alanna woke up, slowly she opened her eyes and then proceeded to rise to sit down and shake her head a little because of extreme pain.

“Ahh my head really hurts” said Alanna.

“This dear, the juice to recover your pain” someone said.

Alanna looked to the side and found a very pretty woman. “Who is she?” murmured Alanna. Instantly Alanna's eyes widened with the expression of shock. “You murderer!” Said Alanna.

The woman grinned and burst out laughing. Then she moves out of his seat and slowly approach Alanna. “Aren't you curious about the secret of my face?” “Oh, I can see it, you must want to know it, isn't it?” said the woman in an annoyed tone.

Alanna was speechless.

“Alright, I'll tell you. First, by drinking this, I will be beautiful eternally. Second, I don't want to kill you because hmmm yaa I incidentally want to do a good thing's haha.” said that woman with a big smile.

“Ahh I forgot, there's one more reason why I didn't kill you. But, I'm afraid to make you sad,” she said with a childlike voice with a ludicrous expression.

“Hmmm Well, I should tell you, since I didn't want you to die of curiosity. The reason is that YOU'RE UGLY HAHAHAHAHAH.”

Alanna just quiet and clenched her teeth.

Suddenly that woman hit Alanna on the cheek very hard and tied Alanna's hand with the rope in her pocket.

“What do you want, hah? Psychopath!” Alanna said loudly.

“Sssttt honey, I just want to share a drink with you. I told you I was in the mood to do a good deed today,” she said with a faint smile.

That woman took a glass from the table with a red liquid in it. Then she approached Alanna and closed her eyes, “Elizabeth bathory, s čistotou krvi panny, urob ma prosim dokonale krasnou a večnou ”the strange woman said.

As soon as the room cooled, the wind blew rapidly and the room calmed down again.

“What's she doing? Why did he chant? And the one in the glass is that blood? And why the sudden gust of wind.” asked Alanna in her heart apprehensively.

Then the glass held by the woman was pushed over Alanna's mouth and forced Alanna to drink the red liquid.

“Mmpphh” Alanna shut her mouth and shook her head.

*Prakkk, that woman slaps Alanna and opens her mouth forcefully with her hands, until finally the liquid succeeds enters her and almost completely swallowed by Alanna. Then quickly, Alanna's mouth was closed with solation.

“Huahhh I've finally succeeded in making you drink my potion that I love so much,” said that woman with a happy smile.

“Okay honey, remember this. My name is Brielle. You can meet me every Friday at this place. Because I'm sure you'll look for me someday because yearning a dish that I've made for you to drink. Bye honey,” says Brielle.

Then the woman left and left Alanna alone with her hands still tied and her mouth closed.

Immediately Alanna stood up and looked for something to untie her. He saw a knife lying on the side table. He quickly tried to untie the rope, and Alanna was able to open it. Then he fled the building.

***
When she got home, she quickly went to her room and took a shower.

In Alanna's bathroom shouting hysterically “arrrrrgghhh you psycho! I'll kill you!”

For a moment Alanna was shocked to look in the mirror and saw a different Alanna than before. His face had been cleaved, and the acne with his face now disappeared. A radiant face that is currently visible in front of the glass.

Alanna was moved to tears “My face, my face is normal and pretty. But how come? Is that woman right? If the blood can make a pretty face?” Alanna is getting confused but at the same time she is very happy.

She quickly finished her bath and quickly hurried toward the computer to find out exactly what had happened to her facial changes. Alanna immediately find out human blood that can make a perfect face. As a result, not much information or articles that discuss her thoughts on human blood that can be used as a beauty potion.

Suddenly Alanna remembered something “Elizabeth Bathory.”

“Yes, that woman uttered an Elizabeth Bathory spell.”

Then he quickly inquired about Elizabeth Bathory, and the results were surprising. Elizabeth was a queen from Slovakia and was well-known for her cruelty by killing over 600 young women to make a ritual bloodbath for their beauty and ageless skin. And he supposedly worshiped satanists.

“Is it possible?” Alanna murmured.

***
(knock, knock, knock)

“Alanna, Alanna, open the door. Let's get ready to go to school quickly” Alanna moms said.

Alanna woke up and hurried to prepare for school.

15 minutes later, when Alanna was coming down the stairs all of a sudden, father and mother of Alanna stood there staring at her in surprise.

“A a a lana, your face?”

“How can? Dear god, your face is so pretty Alanna” moms said with happy sobs.

“Honey, you're so beautiful, what happened to your face returning to normal Alanna?” Alanna's dad asked with curiosity.

“Emmm I don't know mom, dad. But yesterday on the way home someone offered me medicine and said he was able to restore my face to perfection,” Alanna answered with a lie.

Alanna was forced to lie to her parents. She was worried that if he explained the truth, the criminal who had given her a change of face would be reported to the police. Alanna wanted to find out first about everything that the woman had done.

***

*In school

“Hey girl, want to go to the club after school huh?” Says a handsome man who was trying to seduce Alanna.

“Huh” Alanna ignored him and just took off.

He chased Alanna and walked beside her, “hey, hey, don't rush. Okay, let me introduce myself. My name is Alex and what's your name?”

“You don't know who am I?” Asked alanna.

Alex shook his head “nope”.

“I'm your classmate, Alex.”

“Really? but I never saw you.”

Alanna's steps stopped, and Alex stopped too. “Look, the ugly girl is coming,” said Alanna.

Alex felt confused and glanced to right and left. “Did you see the ugly Alanna come? where?”

“Here, I am Alanna” answered Alanna with a big smile.

“Haa, impossible! How can? Did you have surgery? Ahh, but it's impossible. Yesterday, your face is still ugly, then now? How can? Hahahah”.

“It's my business! So you stay out of it” Alanna snapped.

Alanna left Alex and entered class. And when in the class, all these eyes were on Alanna.

“Hei, you the new kid? Don't sit in Alanna chair. She's the ugliest student in this school. You don't want to ugly like her, right? Hahahahahah”

“I'm Alanna, am I wrong if I sit in myself chair?” Said Alanna.

All shocked “huh you Alanna? How is that possible? Are you in surgery?”

“None of your business, mind your own business!” Alanna answered sarcastically.

Chapter 3

One week passed, now Alanna already has many friends because of her beauty and particularly because she was so clever that it attracted her friends to her.

“Okay guys, I'm going home bye,” said Alanna.

“Okay Alanna, don't forget you have to come to Emma's party tomorrow,” her friends said.

While waiting for the bus at the bus stop, Alanna continued playing her gadgets and suddenly remembered that it was Friday. The day she had to meet that murderer woman to take away his curiosity about what happened in the past.

* in the old building

Alanna continued to enter the old building without fear, when she arrived at the scene it turned out that the woman Alanna was looking for was not there.

“Where is that woman? Is she cheating me? Hhh okay I will wait she until the evening,”she muttered.

In less than five minutes, Alanna suddenly heard a thumping of feet coming in the direction of the room.

“Ah hey Alanna, please help me pick up this woman,” said Brielle.

Alanna was surprised “not willing!”

“You little shit.” Then Brielle dragged his victims into the bathtub by dragging them.

“Well, Alanna why are you here?” Asked Brielle.

“I wanted to ask you about what happened last week” Alanna retorted.

“I knew it, you’ll come to meet me, okay I’ll explain all of it.”

Then the two of them sat on the small sofa in the room.

“2 years ago when I was depressed because I was dumped by my boyfriend. He dumped me because he was having an affair with a prettier woman. I was hurt, and I was angry with him and I thought about killing myself. But I avoided committing suicide because I wanted revenge on my ex-boyfriend first. Then two weeks later, my friend, a horror explorer, took me to Slovakia. She invited me in because she wanted to cheer me up by doing something she said she liked. The country I visited was Slovakia and the first place I visited was Cachtice castle. Then as I visited the place, an unexpected turn came as I was circling the castle all by myself and the soul of the occupant appeared suddenly. I was truly surprised, and what even more surprised when the ghost spoke to me that, if I wanted to have such a pretty face like her, I would have to perform a ritual of drinking the blood of a fresh virgin. And then it just disappeared. But the ghost didn't look so scary Alanna, she looked like a very beautiful woman. Then, I got curious and found out everything there was to know about that ghost that turned out to be Elizabeth Bathory the infamous serial killer. But I don't care if she's mean or something. I was curious and my ambition to achieve such an amazing beauty made me this person now. And as you see Alanna, that I am exceedingly beautiful and very young. And finally my revenge has been avenged.”

“Well, it's a long story, isn't it? Wahhh hahahahaha Hang on! Why would I tell you such a long story,” Brielle said with a smirk. “Are you now interested in being a sadist like me? Hah".

“I'm not interested” with Alanna's nervous reply. 

“My little girl, do you think the beauty I've given you will last forever? Hahah no baby, your face will return to normal in a month".

“Then what should I do?” asked Alanna apprehensively.

“Do what I do,” Brielle replied.

“By killing the girls?”

Brielle just nodded.

“Then, does it have to kill every Friday constantly?” Ask Alanna.

“No honey, you can do any day, therefore I'm busy, so I just do it every Friday.”

“To maintain your beauty, all you have to do is drink a girl's blood once a month, and then if you want a pretty face you have to drink it every two weeks. Well easy isn't it?” Brielle said.

Alanna was speechless, and her decision baffled her. “Okay, I choose to maintain my beauty face,” Alanna says.

“Smart girl” Brielle says

Brielle gave Alanna her card “here's my card, contact me on Friday to do training”.

“Thank you.”

“Are you still comfortable being here huh? My work to kill that woman has been delayed because of you” Brielle glanced at her victims in the tub with a smirk.

“Oh okay, I'm sorry. I'll contact you later, Brielle. Nice to meet you,” said Alanna.

***

Chapter 4

“Okay, it's the right decision Alanna. You've been craving a pretty face, haven't you? It is time for you to be above those who have underestimated you,” says Alanna talking to herself in front of the mirror.

Then Alanna reached into her pocket and called someone. “Hello Brielle, I'm ready for action.”

“Okay Alanna, meet me at the building as usual,” she replied.

* In the building

“Okay, first you have to go undercover wearing this.” Brielle conjured a black hat and a mask. Then Alanna put on the hat and covered part of her face with a mask.

“Then where are we going?” Said Alanna.

“Our first target is a quiet café,” Brielle says.

“Okay we go.”

Then they drive up the car to the destination café. “Look at that Alanna, there's a girl sitting alone in the café. Let's wait till she's done,” Brielle says.

After 30 minutes later, the woman who was being targeted by Brielle and Alanna had finally left the café.

“Okay, you are holding over the car, when I wave your hand you must quickly pick me up,” Brielle says.

Alanna nodded her head.

Then Brielle got out of the car, and she walked around casually following the girl she was after until no one had actually seen her to do the action. Brielle quickly covered the girl's nose with a cloth that has been given a drug. Brielle waved her hand, and Alanna quickly drove her car toward Brielle.

***

“Now, your part is to kill this girl,” said Brielle, giving her a knife.

“I can't do it” answered Alanna.

Brielle glaring at Alanna “just come home!”

“Hhhh okay okay” Alanna's hand trembled at receiving the knife.

Then slowly Alanna approached the girl who was in her hostage lying unconscious in the bathtub. Then Alanna stabbed the girl in the heart and slit her throat in tears. Brielle only smiled sarcastically and shook her head as she watched Alanna kill the girl while crying hysterically.

“Alanna, now you have to cut the woman's entire body to let the blood flow out”

“Ha? Slit it again? Hhhh okay okay" sighed Alanna.

Then Alanna began cutting off the girl's head and then turning to the stomach, hands then feet.

“Okay now you take the blood with the glass beside you,” Brielle said.

“Done” Alanna answered.

Brielle handed a piece of paper to Alanna “here, do as I say.”

“Elizabeth Bathory, s čistotou krvi panny, urob ma prosím dokonale krásnou a večnou” Brielle says.

“Elizabeth Bathory, s čistotou krvi panny, urob ma prosím dokonale krásnou a večnou” Alanna repeated.

A strong wind suddenly blew.

“And then drink that blood” slowly Alanna gulping down the blood in her hand. Unable to bear the smell of blood, she covered her nose with her hands while frowning.

“Well, I guess you can do this ritual on your own,” Brielle says.

“But I still haven't been able to kidnap someone.”

“I can help you kidnap, but it must coincide with my daily ritual. When it's time for you to feed, just call me.”

“Okay, I'll call you later, and then we must dispose of this woman's body, Where?” Ask Alanna.

“We bury her behind this building.”

***

Chapter 5

Five months have passed, and who knows, Alanna has killed about 10 girls just to spite her ambition of beauty and youth. None of her family or any of her friends know that even her cover as a murderer has not been noticed by the public and the police. Now Alanna has become an expert as a villain who kills girls. Thus, now Alanna's aura is increasingly radiating extraordinary beauty. Make the men want to keep going.

“Hello Alanna”

“Hi Joe, what's up?” Ask Alanna.

“Now, I'm in front of your house,” answer Joe.

“Huh? How do you know where I live, Joe?

“It doesn't matter Alanna, now get your ass downstairs.”

“Okay, hold on.”

Then Alanna went downstairs to see Joe outside her house. And as soon as Alanna opened the door, she was startled by the enormous bouquet of flowers held by Joe.

“Joe what is this?” Ask Alanna in shame.

“Alanna, as you know we've known each other for four months. But, I don't want to just be your ordinary friend. I want to be a different friend, that you need all the time, love you all the time, and watch over you all the time. Alanna will you be my girlfriend?" Joe said with hope.

“Joe, I can't believe you would do this for me. Of course, Joe, I want to be your girlfriend," Alanna smiles and gives Joe a big hug.

Alanna feels happy that her first love since two years ago is now hers. Little did Alanna know that her beauty power would win Joe's heart in the end. With this, Alanna would grow ambitious to have a beautiful face forever and wouldn't care if she had to kill and drink hundreds of girls' blood.

“Eheem ehem”

Alanna turns back and sees her mom and dad giggling as they see Alanna and Joe hugging.

“Mom, this is Joe and now he's my boyfriend,” she said excitedly.

“Oh hello Joe, I hope you can endure her nagging manner” Alanna mother whispered with a tingle.

“Mommmm”

“okay guys, how about if today we celebrate your happiness by cooking barbecue,” said Alanna's father

“lets gooooo”

***

Two months went by, Alanna and Joe were doing well and even her life seemed normal. But there was a moment when Alanna's crimes began to unravel.

“Hey honey, do you want me to take you home this time?” Ask Joe hopefully.

“I told you, Joe, every Friday I couldn't be with you first, because I take cooking lessons with mom.”

“But I just want to escort you honey”

“No Joe, I can take care of myself, okay”answered Alanna firmly

“okay, bye be careful honey”

Then Joe left, but Joe didn't really go. He hid behind the wall to watch Alanna. This time Joe wants to make sure Alanna does go home. Because Joe was surprised at Alanna's behavior every Friday, even sending her home to be refused.

Shortly thereafter, Joe saw Alanna picked up by the sporty car. Joe sees that doesn't believe that Alanna's been lying. Quickly, Joe followed her in a cab. Because if he uses his own car, he's afraid he'll be discovered.

“Where are you going actually, Alanna hhhh,” Joe muttered in disgust.

15 minutes later, the car carrying Alanna hasn't stopped yet. Until, finally the car drove slowly.

“Why her car slowed down, whether she was following a girl in front of her,” Joe hissed.

At once Alanna's car stopped, and she got out of the car but put on a mask. Then Alanna approached the girl and injected her with drugs and dragged the woman into the car.

“What?! What Alanna did! Why did he do that?“Joe was so shocked.

Then Alanna's car drove at top speed and Joe chased after her.

20 minutes later the car that Alanna was on was headed for an old building. Joe was shocked by all of this. When they arrived, Alanna and Brielle brought the woman they held captive by carrying her along to the building.

Joe followed their footsteps slowly. After arriving in the room, Joe was shocked to see what Alanma had done. Alanna killed the girl she had kidnapped with a sadist. Then drink the blood of the woman.

Unable to endure what Alanna was doing, Joe quickly recorded what Alanna was doing and after that Joe hurried away.

An hour later in the building, there was suddenly a police siren. Alanna and Brielle who heard it was shocked and amazed that their action had never been uncovered before. With swift steps they hurried away.

“Let's run Alanna,” Brielle said.

But when they were about to run out the door, the police confronted her first.

“Oh you devil,” said one of the cops.

Shocked by the police's arrival, Alanna screamed hysterically and threatened everyone with the knife she had been holding. Unexpectedly, Alanna pushed the police firmly and climbed the balcony of the building in front of her. Frustrated by all this, Alanna intended to kill herself.

“All stay back! Or I'll jump off this building! I'm not going to jail! Arrrrrgghhhhh It's all your fault Brielle! I hate it! I hate you, Elizabeth Bathory!” Threatened alanna hysterically.

“Alanna what are you doing!” Alanna's mother said from underneath the building.

Alanna who heard that then cried wistfully and said “mom, dad, I'm sorry. During this time I have become a devil who is very evil. I just want to be beautiful mommm. Joe, I love you so much Joeeee”.

Suddenly Alanna felt a strong breeze come beside her.

“hahh you Elizabeth Bathory?” Alanna was shocked by the arrival of Elizabeth beside her. The gost who always she worshiped but never met with her. 

“Right, come on Alanna, come with me. You’ll be happy with me better than here.”

“No! you’ve made life hell! I hate you Elizabeth aarrrghhh” 

All of sudden, the ghost Elizabeth appeared in a terrible face and then strangled Alanna.

“Uhuk uhuk please help me” says Alanna.

Soon Alanna fell from the balcony and died violently.

“Noooo, Alannaaaa” Alanna's parents cried hysterically.

“What! No, Alanna. I'm sorry, Alanna,” Joe murmured in tears.

Name: Indri Indah Yulianti

Student id number: 1830911020